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August 2, 2009 | "Whoa whoa I gotta go...back to schoooool...again",A Royale Pain,Book One,Book Stuff,Draven Atreides,Draven Atreides, Teenage Informant Series,Life in General,Movie Queue,School Daze,The 4-1-1 on Me,Weekend Wrap-Up,Writing Movements

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Saturday, Mr. Maul and I spent the better part of the day at Danny’s Family Car Wash. I spent $157 getting my car washed, seriously detailed, and an oil change. We didn’t get out of there until mid-afternoon. Apparently, everyone else had the same idea because it. was. Crowded. We had intended to see a 515 showing of 500 DAYS OF SUMMER, but when we got there, it was sold out! We didn’t find that out until after we bought the tickets. Instead of going to the counter, we went to the DIY ticket dispenser thingy. I imagine they would’ve told us at the counter, thereby saving us $14. We weren’t expecting a huge crowd for this movie. It’s playing at what I refer to as the “indie” theater. We were given passes, though, so maybe we’ll see it this weekend. It looks funny.

Sunday, we found out that our kitty has a really bad urinary tract infection. Poor thing. She’s trying to use the bathroom and only little drops are coming out. We have to give her “animal penicillin” for the next two weeks. Orally. Twice a day. As in drops. Yeah. Not fun. She acts like we’re trying to kill her. Mr. Maul has to wrap her up in a blanket and then practically shove the syringe in her mouth. This must be what it’s like when you’re trying to get sick kids to take medication. What’s worse is that we have to go back two weeks after this, get the second bottle, and do it all over again. For another two weeks. Needless to say, she is so going to hate us.

Writing Movements – Nothing yet. As you can see by the big notice at the top, I’m currently looking for beta readers for Book One. I’ll be sending it out to have it professionally edited soon. I started the revision process for Book Two, but had to sideline it while doing additional revisions for Book One. When it comes to writing and revisions, I can’t multi-task. I have to concentrate on one thing at a time or it doesn’t get done. Once I send Book One out, I’ll get back to Number Two.

School Daze – I’m preparing for orientation. I have to go to Prescott at the end of the month and I’ve been getting info by mail and email. Two weeks before I leave, I’ll find out my Core Faculty. I’m both excited and nervous. This is a very out-of-the-box experience for me, so I think it’s going to take some getting used to. They’re already asking me to come up with a name for my first class! Yikes! I have a generalized overview of my program, but I’m not quite sure how to break it all down. I have a feeling I’ll be conversing with my BF soon.

OT: TRUEBLOOD is gettin’ good! I’m starting to understand what Maryanne is, but Sookie and Bill need to get their asses back to Bon Temps. There is some serious shit goin’ down!

So, that’s it for me. How was your weekend?

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July 31, 2009 | A Royale Pain,Book One,Book Stuff,Draven Atreides,Life in General,Revision Heaven,The 4-1-1 on Me

I am done and done with revisions for Book One! I plan to send this off to have it edited professionally, but I’m also looking for beta readers.

Back Cover Blurb:

A day at the spa can be a “royale” pain.

Sixteen-year-old Draven Atreides has just started a new gig as an FBI informant. Her To Do list includes: adjust to new life, make new friends, and try not to tell said new friends about her secret job.

A French chemist is peddling his “specially formulated” products to high class spas and his latest target is celeb favorite, The Royale Treatment Day Spa. Unfortunately, his products cause some nasty side effects and the results are so not pretty. Just when Draven’s first assignment seems to be heading south, she receives unwanted assistance in the form of Rader Deschanel. What does he want with Draven? Will she be able to solve her first official case without blowing her cover?

WHO I’M LOOKING FOR:

~ YA critique group members
~ YA writers (teens and adults)
~ Book reviewers who review YA novels (teens and adults)

WHAT I NEED:

~ Detailed feedback on what’s not working, what needs improvement, suggestions, etc.

WHAT YOU’LL GET:

~ A complete 42,000 word YA fiction novel to read in MS Word format

~ Your name in the Acknowledgements section

~ A free copy of the book whenever it gets published

~ A chance to beta read the whole series

~ The knowledge that you helped edit a novel

~ Eternal thanks from the author

Contact me at celise[at]celisedowns[dot]com if you’re interested.

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July 29, 2009 | A Royale Pain,Book One,Book Stuff,Draven Atreides,Draven Atreides, Teenage Informant Series,Revision Heaven,Revision Report

I’m up to Chapter 9 in typing up revisions. In the process, I realized that Chapter 5 had only 5 pages within the chapter. 5 double-spaced pages, that is. Single-spaced would’ve probably been, like, 2-3 pages. LOL.

Nice. Not.

I ended up combining Chapter 5 and 6, so now the rest of the chapter headings are off by one.

Which could be a good thing. The Psych Eval section could be a whole chapter by itself, it’s that long. Well, it seems like it on paper. I could be wrong, but we’ll see.

July 27, 2009 | A Royale Pain,Book One,Book Stuff,contests,Draven Atreides, Teenage Informant Series,Life in General,Movie Queue,Revision Heaven,The 4-1-1 on Me,Weekend Wrap-Up,Writing Movements

YOU HAVE THREE MORE DAYS TO VOTE! Enter to win either a $50 or $25 gift card to an independent bookstore in your area. Should I change Draven’s last name? Head over to my FUN STUFF page and give your two cents. For teens only, ages 13-18. Deadline is July 31st, MST.

Saturday, I saw THE UGLY TRUTH twice in one day. It wasn’t a hardship, really, seeing Gerard Butler for a couple of hours. It’s interesting to see how well he can hide that Scottish accent of his. In 300 and ROCKNROLLA, he let it all hang out. But in this movie, P.S. I LOVE YOU and NIM’S ISLAND, he Americanized it a little bit, but the accent still slipped through. I didn’t think Mr. Maul would want to see it, but he surprised me by suggesting it.

Sunday, we went to breakfast at U.S. Egg. My co-worker and sometimes go there for lunch. It used to be called the Blue Plate Brunchery, but now they’re under new management. With a completely different menu. That’s one of the places I like to go that serves breakfast all day long. Sometimes, a burger or a sandwich just doesn’t cut it. We weren’t too impressed with the coffee, but the food we ordered was pretty good. Mr. Maul liked their protein pancakes (blueberries, cinnamon and slivers of almonds are baked into the pancake batter).

We also watched QUANTUM OF SOLACE on Blu-Ray later that night. I think he bought the regular version for me, but of course, this one looks a lot better.
Surprisingly, I have yet to finish typing up the revisions, but I had good writing movement last week: 12 new pages in The Lesson segment. Yeah, it had already been written, but when I was going back through it—and trying to find a place in the novel to put it—I realized I needed to add a little more detail. 12 new pages emerged. Yay me.

So, how was weekend?

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July 21, 2009 | A Royale Pain,Book One,Book Stuff,contests,Draven Atreides,Draven Atreides, Teenage Informant Series,Life in General,Movie Queue,Revision Heaven,The 4-1-1 on Me,Weekend Wrap-Up

YOU STILL HAVE TIME TO VOTE! Enter to win either a $50 or $25 gift card to an independent bookstore in your area (yes, I changed my mind. We need to support local bookstores more). Should I change Draven’s last name? Head over to my FUN STUFF page and give your two cents. For teens only, ages 13-18. Deadline is July 31st, MST.

Friday after work, I went to see HARRY POTTER AND THE HALF-BLOOD PRINCE. I liked it. It amazes me how much the characters have grown. Literally and figuratively. I mean, when these kids were tapped to play Harry, Hermione and Ron, they were 10-11. We’ve watched them grow up. Rupert’s 20 yrs old and Emma will be attending Brown University. How wild is that? I’ve never read the books, but I’ve seen all the movies. Every. Single. One. Of. Them. So unlike the extensive review I read over at Horserider’s blog, I can honestly say that I never have any expectations going in when I see these movies. I don’t know what’s missing, what’s been added or how important those deletions/additions are to the story. I just like the movies, so I go see them. Plain and simple. One thing for all you HP fans to keep in mind, and it’s also something Daniel Radcliffe mentioned in an interview, is that they can’t put everything from the books into the movie. It’s just not possible. Just be glad they’re making the movies.

Saturday, I spent the better part of the morning in the heat at the The Arizona Rod & Classic Car Club Annual Backpack Giveaway. My Dad is a member of this car club and this is their second year doing this backpack giveaway for ChildHelp and Keys. It was my second time volunteering as well and this time, I was manning the Book Booth. Not by myself though, because that would’ve been a freakin’ nightmare. Each booth had something different. Backpacks, school supplies (puzzles and notebooks), children’s books, free hot dogs and drinks, raffle tickets, etc. Once kids got their backpacks, they could visit the other booths and pick up stuff.

Last year, I was giving away stuffed animals—this year it was children’s books. Kohl’s donated over 1000 books. Me and 5 other people gave away 9 different titles, one of which was Kung Fu Panda (that one was a big hit, needless to say). The one thing I discovered at this event this year was that a couple of volunteers felt “entitled.” During the course of handing out books, a volunteer from another booth (and I really wish I could remember from what company, because I would’ve called them out in this post) came over and helped herself to two books saying that “her daughter would really like these.”

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